"Alice? Are you okay?" A voice called, startling Alice to turn to her left to meet the source of the intrusion.
"D-Daniel! Don't sneak up on my like that, you scared the life out of me," Alice squeaked flattening out her yellow sun dress which crinkled when she jumped.
"I apologise, was just wondering if the pretty lady would like some company," he joked before taking the remaining spot on the bench.
Normally Alice would say no. Not because she didn't like Daniel, quite the opposite in fact. No, it was because the cliff-side was her private domain where she could go get some alone time. But, something in Daniel deep eyes convinced her other wise. The smirk he sent her after she responded sent butterflies in her chest, assuring her that she made the right choice.
"The view is beautiful," Daniel said after a pause, staring at Alice as the wind blew her hair as if it was waves.
"I know," she replied, her gaze briefly flashing to him from where it was focused on the horizon. When she saw what he was referring to a deep blush flooded her cheeks.
I'm not supposed to be commenting on these but this is a brilliant example of incorporating all the ideas we discussed into really suitable prose. The intrusion, her weakness, him knowing more than her, the focus on their appearances in contrasting ways and all the cliches amongst other things are spot-on.
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